假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号（ ）, 在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

Answer 1

小题1:usually→  usual
小题2:while →when
小题3:hear→ heard  
小题4:happened →happening
小题5:shocking→ shocked 
小题6:peoples →people
小题7:pushed 前去掉had
小题8:but → and
小题9:his →my
小题10:proud后加 of