英语翻译附件是我筛选出的8为候选人简历,其中2号和3号能用英文沟通,其余的人选工厂经验非常丰富,以下是我整理的简明信息,请查看.如有合适人选请尽快告诉我,我将立即为您安排面试时间,

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英语翻译
附件是我筛选出的8为候选人简历,其中2号和3号能用英文沟通,其余的人选工厂经验非常丰富,以下是我整理的简明信息,请查看.
如有合适人选请尽快告诉我,我将立即为您安排面试时间,
Please kindly find the eight attachments is the resume that I choose.Number 2 and 3 can use English to communicate; the others have a good experience for factory.Please check I put some simple information as below.
Please tell me as soon as possible if you feel someone is suitable,I will arrange the interview for you immediately,thanks.

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Please kindly find the eight attachments is the resume that I choose.
（find和is,双谓语了）
改：Attached please find eight resumes which I chose for your review.

Number 2 and 3 can use English to communicate; the others have a good experience for factory.
(experience不可数,不用a）
改：Candidate 2 and 3 can communicate in English; the others have good factory experience.

Please check I put some simple information as below.
（check和put双谓语,这种情况要用从句）
改：Please check below for the general information I put together.
Please tell me as soon as possible if you feel someone is suitable, I will arrange the interview for you immediately, thanks.
改：Please let me know as soon as possible if you think someone is suitable for the job. I will arrange an interview for the person with you immediately. Thanks.