高二英语作文求批改!那位高人帮忙批改一下我的英语作文（一定要有批改）,Self-introductionMynameisY.S.H,Istudyinanarthighschool.Ilovepaintingverymuch,IhavebeenpaintingsinceIwasfiveyearsold.Myartteach

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高二英语作文求批改!
那位高人帮忙批改一下我的英语作文（一定要有批改）,
Self-introduction
My name is Y.S.H,I study in an art high school .Ilove
painting very much,I have been painting since I was five years old.My art teacher,Mrs Xu very like me,she always said to me that “Of very fine quality!”or “You are a genius ” I don’t think I’m a genius ,I think it’s genetic ,because my father is a calligrapher and my grandfather is a paniter.
Except that I have no habby .
I’m not a good student ,because I always fail in ex-
-aminations,regardless of Math,English or physics.but I am
a study commissioner now,but not only that I have joined S.U .I don’t know why this ,I’m still not a good student,
maybe my teacher want to encourage me.Whatever I will try
to improve my score.

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Self-introduction
My name is Y.S.H (and) I study in an art high school .Ilove
painting very much, I have been painting since I was (five -years- old).My art teacher,Mrs Xu very (likes) me,she always (says) to me that “of very fine quality!”or “You are a genius !” I don’t think I’m a genius ,I think (that's) genetic ,(as) my father is a calligrapher and my grandfather is a paniter.
(I have no other habbies apart from that).
(Though) I’m not a good student ,because I always fail in ex-
-aminations,regardless of Math,English or physics. I am
a study commissioner now, but I’m still not a good student.
Maybe my teacher (wants) to encourage me. I will (my best) try
to improve my score whatever happens.