帮忙批改一篇英语作文有错的地方请指出来,ihaveahamsteraspet.ithinkit'seasytocareof.theyonlyneedsomefoodtoeat.theyalwayssleepalldayandsometimesnoisyatnight,they'reverysmall.youcanpalythemonyourhand

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帮忙批改一篇英语作文
有错的地方请指出来,
i have a hamster as pet.i think it's easy to care of .they only need some food to eat .they always sleep all day and some times noisy at night,they're very small.you can paly them on your hands.
it's very interesting .what's more ,
they're chraper than rabbits or cats.

Answer 1

第一句as后应加入a,第二句to take care of it,some times noisy 中noisy不能单独用在这 应该用being noisy或者make a noise代替,play后面应该加介词with