这是我一篇文章,写的地道一些.SPORT&InMyLifeSPORTmeansanecessarypartofmylife——atleastitwas.I'vebeenaathletetoworkformyschoolfor5years.Allofthesportsstudentsinourschoolweretrainingafterschool.Beside

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这是我一篇文章,写的地道一些.
SPORT & In My Life
SPORT means a necessary part of my life —— at least it was.
I've been a athlete to work for my school for 5 years.
All of the sports students in our school were training after school.
Besides this time,we have much time to work on our interest —— yes,sport is
our common love.
When it came summer,my teammates and I was trained on the shool course,
sometimes we were at the expert palaestra.
And there's no other students at this time because they all spent their holidays at home.
When it was winter,of course we need to prepare our items for the compete the next spring.
Anyway,we've spent most of time on training.
When it's at the end of April,there was a big sports meeting for all athlets of
junior schools and senior highs.
I took part in 100-meter race,long jump and girl''s 400-meter relay race.
Ah,they were so exciting for me and of course I felt a bit of tension at it.
And certainly I met with good results.Hum...Congratulations!
Ok,that's all what I wanna say today.
I yearn my teamates,my good coach,and the nice time at that time.

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SPORT means a necessary part of my life —— at least it is（改）.
I had（改）been an（改）athlete in my school for 5 years（改）.
All of the students whose major are physical education （改）trained after class（改）.
Besides that （改）time,we spent （改）much more（改） time（改）on our interest —— yes,sport was （改）our common love.
When summer came（改）,my teammates and I was training on the course （改）of our shool,sometimes we were at the expert palaestra.
And there were（改）no other students at this time because they all spent their holidays at home.
When winter came（改）,of course we needed （改）to prepare our items for the competion（改） of the next spring.
Anyway,we had （改）spent most of our （改）time on training.
When it was （改）at the end of April,there was a big sports meet(改) for all athlets of junior and senior（改） high schools.
I took part in 100-meter race,long jump and girl's 400-meter relay race.
Ah,they were so exciting for me and of course I felt a bit of tension（改）.
And certainly I got（改）good results.Hum...Congratulations!
Ok,that's all that（改）I wanna say today.
I miss（改）my teamates,my good coach,and the nice time at that time.