看帮看看这个句子Sheenjoyedherselfmakingtheassistantbringalmosteverythinginthewindowbeforefinallybuyingthedressshehadfirstaskedfor.这句子里的before做是介词吧可不可以改成：beforesheboughtthedresssheh

Question

看帮看看这个句子
She enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window before finally buying the dress she had first asked for.
这句子里的before做是介词吧
可不可以改成：
before she bought the dress she had first asked for
如果改成下面这样的句子：
After enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window,she finally bought the dress she had first asked for.
这个句子有语法错误么
因为是自己改的所以没信心呵呵
我只是吧before换成after 然后把这个介词 变成连词用
befoer和after可以做介词也可以做连词的吧

Answer 1

她不亦乐乎地折腾着那位售货员 把橱窗里几乎所有的东西都拿了下来 才最终决定 买下她第一次要的那一件衣服.
在她最终买下她第一次要的那一件衣服之前before finally buying the dress she had first asked for.也可以这么说
我觉得你那么改是可以的
After enjoyed herself making the assistant bring almost everything in the window,she finally bought the dress she had first asked for.
在她不亦乐乎的折腾着那位售货员 把橱窗里几乎所有的东西都拿了下来之后
before和after 在这里我觉得可以相互替换