英语作文大家来找茬Withthedevelpomentofeconomyandcultuer,people'sviewofmaritaltreatmentshavechangedalot.From1970to2000,thenumberofmarriageshavereducedalot.in1970thenumberisabout2.5millions,butafter30yearsthe

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With the develpoment of economy and cultuer,people's view of marital treatments have changed a lot.
From 1970 to 2000,the number of marriages have reduced a lot.in 1970 the number is about 2.5millions,but after 30 years the number is decreasing to 2 millions.With this change,the number of devorces in 2000 is as same as in 1970 .SO it is easy to see the proportion of divorce has increased .well,then what people choose to face their love life?By observing the chart carefully,I find that many people never married or don’t widowed any more.,and they choose live alone or find a new lover instead.
People's concept is progressing constantly.Seeking better and free life is everybody's right.But i think whether people should consider and deal with marriage carefully?
我写的.饿..多多指教,应该有很多错的语法

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From 1970 to 2000,the number of marriages has reduced a lot
decreasing-decreased
many people have never married
另外cultuer 应该是culture吧 文化