请English高手帮忙修改一篇关于2008北京奥运的作文阿.本人语法错误可能比较多.望各位大人指出.IlovetheOlympicGamessinceIwasalittlegirl.Butthisyear.Ithasanothermeaningtomebecausethe29thOlympicGames

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请English高手帮忙修改一篇关于2008北京奥运的作文阿.
本人语法错误可能比较多.望各位大人指出.
I love the Olympic Games since I was a little girl.But this year.It has another meaning to me because the 29th Olympic Games are awarded to the city of Beijing in 2008.As a Chinese,Olympic means proud to me.
China is a large country with a great deal of history .This is the first time for China to host the Olympic Games.That means China is becoming stronger and stronger in every hand.As a Chinese,Olympic means development to me.
With the motto "New Beijing,Great Olympics",Beijing promises to host a "Green Olympics",a "Hi-tech Olympics" and the "People's Olympics".Everyone is doing his best for the Olympic.I am looking forward hearing the whole world cheering for China and the diligent Chinese people.This time,Olympic means united to me.
Olympic really means a lot,either to me or to the other Chinese peole.But each of us praies for the same thing.That is the success of the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing.

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全文如下,我按照你的文章改的,意思基本是你的意思,但这样符合英文的正式表述...有哪不妥,见凉
I dreamed the Olympic Games would come to China when I was a little girl.Now the dream came ture.The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,the capital of the china,in 2008,which is another sense for me because it's my honor as a chinese
Firstly,it is the first time for China with a great deal of history to hold the Olympic Games,which means China is becoming stronger and stronger in various aspects as well as for me that China is developing rapidly.
Secondly,everyone is trying his best for the Olympic in China With the motto "New Beijing,Great Olympics"and a "Green Olympics",a "Hi-tech Olympics" and the "People's Olympics" Beijing promises to host .Olympic means united to me when I am looking forward to hear the whole world cheering for China and the diligent Chinese people.
Last but not least,Olympic actually means a lot,not only for me,but for the whole Chinese peole.And everyone here expects the same thing,the success of the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing.