帮忙看一下有没有语病,帮忙修改下.（只修改语病）IthinkstudyingabroadisapleasureandIyearnforthings.Thestudyisnotonlytoraisetheleveloftheindividualculture,alsoletusunderstandthelocalcustoms.ButIthinks

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帮忙看一下有没有语病,帮忙修改下.（只修改语病）
I think studying abroad is a pleasure and I yearn for things.The study is not only to raise the level of the individual culture,also let us understand the local customs.But I think studying abroad is the pros and cons.The good thing is that we can feel the foreign customs; English pronunciation and listening will naturally increase.Do not feel the same way of teaching.Learn more and more foreigners regarded cultural.Parents may also have face.But the disadvantages are also exposed,students need to spend a lot of money,this is one thing that let a lot of people have a headache.My mother said to me:"if it don’t need the money,you can go ." And always the plane or the ferry to go abroad,the international traffic accidents often occur,if the children of the family died,to other people is also a deadly blow.And language learning will reduce,but will produce of family care; family will also have the care for us.Many people with relatives and thousands of miles apart,each other's thoughts wandering.If I were you,I will be in the economic conditions permit conditions,to study abroad.I hope to convince some people,let my parents as I go along.So concerned have neither,also does not make them alone.Excellent learning more advanced knowledge in foreign countries,makes the contribution for the Chinese

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,have pros and cons
,will increase naturally
...if you don't have to pay the fee