请英语高手看下这段英语语法有没有错误?Chinaisacountryoftalentedpeople,Collegestudentsareproudofthetimes,especially,thestudentswhoareattendprestigiousuniversityareoutstandingpersonsamongpeers.Intheeyesofmany

Question

请英语高手看下这段英语语法有没有错误?
China is a
country of talented people,College students are proud of the times,
especially,the students who are attend prestigious university are outstanding persons among peers.In the eyes of many people,who admitted
to the prestigious university ,life is half the battle.But that is not the
case.In recent years,the internet report constantly that some of prestigious university
students can not find a job after
graduation .

Answer 1

中国是一个
　　国家的人才,大学生是时代的骄傲,
　　特别是,学生上名牌大学是同行的优秀的人.在许多人的眼中,他承认
　　著名的大学生活是成功的一半.但这不是
　　案例.近年来,互联网报告不断,一些名牌大学
　　学生找不到工作
　　毕业典礼.