求助高考英语作文自己写的Asweallknow,wherewechoosetoworkinfluencethequalityoflifewewilllive.So,itisimportantforustomakethedecision,whethertoworkincitysorcountrysides?Workingandlivingincityshavesomeadva

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求助高考英语作文 自己写的
As we all know,where we choose to work influence the quality of life we will live.So,it is important for us to make the decision,whether to work in citys or countrysides?
Working and living in citys have some advantages.For example,you can have a high salary,a convenient transport,and can easy be promoted.Howerer,you may have too much competition and feel presure.
Meanwhile,working in the countryside also have strengths,like having a good everionment,breathing fresh air,but it is not good for your development.

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你确定where能引导主语从句?最好用the place吧.而且cities的复数错了啊.第二段开头是has,第二行应该是easily；最后一段也应该是has,动名词后接单数形式啊!如果高考想写一篇高分作文,最好多用一些诸如定语从句、强调句等高级句式以及高级词汇,尤其是开头结尾一定要写好,而且句子的长短要搭配得当