请问下面这个英语句子我写的对吗?中文想要表达的是：由于2月29日荷兰的音乐会有一些重要的来宾（贵宾）参加,所以我们恳请您可以多提供给我们一些音乐会的门票吗?现在我们已经有6张门

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请问下面这个英语句子我写的对吗?
中文想要表达的是：由于2月29日荷兰的音乐会有一些重要的来宾（贵宾）参加,所以我们恳请您可以多提供给我们一些音乐会的门票吗?现在我们已经有6张门票,可以再给我们6张吗?
Because February 29 Dutch concert has some important guests to attend,so we request you can provide us with some tickets for the concert?Now we have six tickets,can give us six pictures?The Dutch concert there need 12 tickets,thank you,

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Because February 29 the concert in the Netherlands has some important guests to attend,so we request you can provide us with some tickets to the concert?Now we have already had six tickets,can you give us six more The Dutch concert there needs 12 tickets,thank you,
我只改动了少数几次,只是为了达意的话,没啥问题了.句子结构不是非常地道.