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A teenager can never have too much great music .Such as rock music ,pop music and so on .however,my forrite kind of music is piano music -For elise .It was written by Beethoven .This is one of the most wonderful music I have ever heard .Because Ihave senced a lively girl is running .As soon as I listen the song ,Ienjoy it very much .When I was six,I always had listened to it before I selpt .So far ,I also prefer listning piano music to listening other .Although I am not very musical .I also know whether this music is great or not .So I think you should listen to this melody ,because you feel excited and enjoy it ,when you listn it .Whaat a pity that you is not listening to this wonderful song!

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A boy can never have too many great music.Such as rock music,pop music and so on.However,I like most of the music is by Alice piano music.It was written by Beethoven.This is a song I heard the most beautiful music.When I listen to this song,I like it very much.When I was six years old,I heard it I slept soundly.So far,I also like to listen to piano music.Although I am not very fond of music.I also know that this music is great.So I think you should listen to the melody,because when you listen to it,you will feel the excitement and enjoyment.Unfortunately,you can't listen to this song!