修改英语片段主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.Thistime,Ididn'tfeelupsetwhentherealitystronglystrucktome.Ihadalreadyknownthesethingswillhappenatlast.ThereforeI'mcalmwithnodisappointment,and

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修改英语片段
主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.
This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and think "Anyhow life will go on,whether you full of sadness or not."
I'm glad your appearance in my life during my best ages,just as a bunch of sunshine bursts into the darkness.
Both of us will be a better person for now and in the future,I always believe firmly.

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I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck me this time.直接用Reality有些奇怪,你应该只清现实是什么./ I didn't feel upset when it went south.（当这件事黄了的时候我没有感到沮丧）
I always knew something bad would happen.（我就知道总会出点事.不过用always有些奇怪,因为always表示一直的意思.）/ I knew things happens.（我知道世事无常）
Therefore,I didn't feel disappointed.I was totally calm,and I thought,"Life goes on no matter how you feel."/ "Sad or not,life will go on."
I'm glad that you appeared ,like a beam of sunlight that breaks through the darkness,in the best years of my life.
不清楚你要说什么……不过最好的年华不应该像黑暗吧.
I believe firmly that both of us will be better people in the days ahead.
都要更好了,“now”就有点不恰当了.
以上是我的建议.你可以当作参考^