帮忙看看下面的小短文有没有语法错误,是在网上看到的,决定用他来展示,但是总感觉是网页翻译的,Everyonesaidthat,inthenightskyisverybeautiful,thestarsintheuniverseaglowing,asinblinklike,verylove

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帮忙看看下面的小短文有没有语法错误,是在网上看到的,决定用他来展示,但是总感觉是网页翻译的,
Everyone said that, in the night sky is very beautiful, the stars in the universe a glowing, as in blink like, very lovely. If plus a large round and is golden brown of the moon hangs in the sky, that this is how good a thing. The bright stars, is how of beauty, all of the people, for it is fascinating, who call them so beautiful, people like them. The bright stars forever beautiful.

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虽然语境很有诗意,这段文字却有很多语法问题,可能（如你所说）是机器翻译的.这样改吧：
It is said that the night sky, with the universe aglow and the stars twinkling, is a beauty to behold. The large, golden brown moon hanging in the sky and surrounded by the bright stars holds great fascination to all people.
Ah, beauty…It is for all to enjoy.