能不能帮我改下语法.有点忙,不好慢慢看.igotyourletter.youaskedmeWHYichooseenglish?maybejustforthebetterjob.youknow.ifidon'tknowhowtowritingorspeakingenglish,ievendon'tknowyou.ifidon'tknowhowtowri

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能不能帮我改下语法.有点忙,不好慢慢看.
i got your letter .you asked me WHY i choose english?maybe just for the better job .you know .if i don't know how to writing or speaking english ,i even don't kno w you .if i don't know how to writing or speaking english .maybe it's too diffcult to find a job .I actually had not very interested in English before ,but there is crazy man.His name is li Yang.he said Only learn English well can better to understand the culture of the world and know how to make communicate,is not just for good work.i agree with him ,and now ,I start to fight for my own future .that 's why i choose english
Beijing is really a good place,I also have been to Beijing once,I hope you XI HUAN BEIJING .

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i got your letter 改成i have received your letter ,收到信是receive,意思应该是,已经收到信,所以用完成时.
you know 改成As you know ,作为状语
I actually had not very interested in English 改成I'm not very interested in English ,感兴趣是be interested in
but there is crazy man 改成 but there is a crazy man
make communicate把make 去掉,communicate已经是动词了
is not just for good workcate改成It's not just for .
I hope you XI HUAN BEIJING 这个错的有点离谱啊,改成I hope that you will like Beijing