本人乃爱好英语菜鸟一个,胡编英文诗一首,若有语法错误还请各位改正；若无则请润色一下.感激不尽!sorryiwastooclosetoyousoihurtyouwithoutintentionbutifileaveyoumylifewillbeboringiwanttobewith

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本人乃爱好英语菜鸟一个,胡编英文诗一首,若有语法错误还请各位改正；若无则请润色一下.感激不尽!
sorry
i was too close to you
so i hurt you without intention
but if i leave you
my life will be boring
i want to be with you every minute
to enjoy your unusual graceful bearing
please don't hate me
and forgive the things that i may make you angry
there are so many things
that i want to tell you
but i must keep silence
i don't know when you came
from the fresh wind to my heart

Answer 1

倒数第三行,把silence改成silent