帮忙改下这篇作文,Ihaveahappyfamily,myfatherisverystrong.HelikeswatchingEnglishmovies.Mymotherisverybeautiful.Shelikessinginganddancing.Weoftenplaytogether.Theywouldtakemetogoshoppingandcookforme.Sometimesthey

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I have a happy family,my father is very strong.He likes watching English movies.My mother is very beautiful.She likes singing and dancing.
We often play together.They would take me to go shopping and cook for me.Sometimes they take me to travel,sometimes we are go to see my grandparents.
When get high marks,they will praise me,very happy.when get a low score,they will encourage me.
I love my father and my mother.My mother and my father love me,we are happy family.
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My family
I have a happy family.My father is very strong.He likes watching English movies.My mother is very beautiful.She likes singing and dancing.
We often play together.They often take me to go shopping and cook for me.Sometimes they take me to visit some places,and sometimes we go to see my grandparents.
When I get high marks,they will praise me and they are very happy.When I get a low score,they will encourage me.
I love my father and my mother.My mother and my father love me We are a happy family