[拓展联系]从下面这段文字中找错误~我看了好几遍,找不到,而且题目没说有几个错误,只有几条横线~PS：顺便说下错误的原因!Hello,everybody!Doyouknowmydream?Doyouwanttokonw?OK,Iwilltellyou!Mydreamis

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[拓展联系]从下面这段文字中找错误~
我看了好几遍,找不到,而且题目没说有几个错误,只有几条横线~
PS：顺便说下错误的原因!
Hello,everybody!
Do you know my dream?Do you wantto konw?OK,I will tell you!
My dream is to be an actor when I grow up.Why?Because Ithink this job is really interesting.Someone wants to be a teacher.But I think that is too boring.And someone wants to be a businessman.But I think taht is terrible,I can't stand it!Why I want to be an actor?I watched a music video when I was 14 years old.It called "High School Musical".This film is from Disney.Though this film is in English,I am very love it.So to be an actor is my dream.Though I am too young to come true my dream,I believe I will do it.At least ,I will be happy!

Answer 1

第一行：“wantto”不是并一块儿的吧?
第二行：“when I grow up”删了（when 一般用在过去时吧）
第三行：“someone wants”改成some people want(someone意为 “某人”）
第四行：can't改为won't（还没做这个工作,应用将来时）,Why I want改为Why want I,语序错
第五行：It called 改为It is called,被动
第六行：I am very love it完全错误,应改为I love it very much
第七行：come true my dream完全错误,应改为realize my dream或make my dream come true