我这个report有哪些错误?Goodmorning,everybody,Iamondutytoday,it‘ssecondtimeformetostandhere.Aswekonw,TheEnglishspokenwordsisveryimportantpartofEnglish,HowtopracticetheEnglishspokenwordsIthinkbesidethatwesho

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我这个report有哪些错误?
Good morning,everybody,I am on duty today,it‘s second time for me to stand here.As we konw,The English spoken words is very important part of English,How to practice the English spoken words I think beside that we should read more and listen more.I also deem the tongue twisters is a good way to practice the English spoken words.Now,I will speak a English spoken word to you.And you can practice it in your free time.Now,let me start!
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不知道你的英语水平怎么样.你这篇report的最大问题,就是Chinglish.你其实就是在用英文去表达中文,而不是表达英文.要学会用英文的思维去写作.汉语重意合,句子之间常靠内部的逻辑关系联系在一起,所谓“形散而神聚”.而英语重形合,句与句之间往往靠各种语言形式紧密结合,而你写得太散.而且有些中文意思并不需要逐词翻译,英语母语者不会这么讲话和写作,而且看上去也很啰嗦.还有一些语法错误.这个,不好改呀~~
多阅读多练习多总结,培养语感,相信你会有所提高的.加油~~~