求高人看看我的英语自我介绍作文写得有什么问题帮我改下Hellowevebadymyname'sLiuxinyi.garaduatedfromprimaryschoolzhaoming.I'm13year'sold.Ilikepalyingguiterandradeingbook.Ithinkthebookahouseofgoldoni

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求高人看看我的英语自我介绍作文写得有什么问题 帮我改下
Hellow evebady my name's Liu xin yi.garaduated from primary school zhao ming.I'm 13 year's old .I like palying guiter and radeing book.I think the book a house of gold oniy radeing we can progrss,so I love radeing book.tank you.

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1,Hello everybody
2,名字后应该为,graduated
3,学校名应大写首字母
4,playing the guitar
5,reading
I think a book is a house of gold.We can't make any progress without reading,so I love reading books.Thank you.