这段话如何写得更有文采啊?（用英语）Whatismore,highertaxrevenuecanalsoleadtotheincreaseofcrimerate.Becausetheincreaseoftaxnotonlyleavesmoreburdentothepublic,butalsoleavesalotofprivateenterprisesbankrup

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这段话如何写得更有文采啊?（用英语）
What is more,higher tax revenue can also lead to the increase of crime rate.Because the increase of tax not only leaves more burden to the public,but also leaves a lot of private enterprises bankrupt.When people's life quality falls,the rise of crime rate becomes a matter of course.According to XX,because of a large scale of tax increase in 2009 and 2010,crime rate is increased accordingly.Among them,cases driven by money was increased by 5%.The rate of fraud,kidnap,robbery and theft have reached a record high,about 7.8%.In Anshan city of Liao Ning province,a man went so far as to kill his own father,then he took out the organs from the body and traded illegally,for the sake of making profit.

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go into liquidation哈度发生