帮看看下面这段英语,有没有语病.这是我回给一外国朋友的.Howareyou?It'spleasureformetomakeacquaintanceofyou!MynameisMengXiaoying.IliveinShenZhen,acompetitioncity!WellcometoChinaanytime.chinahaveareallylo

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帮看看下面这段英语,有没有语病.这是我回给一外国朋友的.
How are you?It's pleasure for me to make acquaintance of you!My name is Meng Xiaoying.I live in ShenZhen,a competition city!Wellcome to China anytime.china have a really long history ,and beautiful cities .best wishes

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How are you? It's a pleasure for me to make acquaintance of you!My name is Meng Xiaoying.I live in ShenZhen,a competition city!Welcome to China .china has a long history with 5000 years ,there also have many beautiful cities . best wishes ! 有几个地方有错,我改了出来,我把原文修改了一下.