求帮我修改或者查找一下有没有语病在这篇英文故事里Helloeverybody,todayIcometotellyouastoryaboutmyself.Twoyearsago,Ihaveagoodfriend,hisEnglishnameisAnthony.Heisveryfreeandeasy,wearethebestfriend.Oneday

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求帮我修改或者查找一下有没有语病在这篇英文故事里
Hello everybody,today I come totell you a story about myself.Two years ago,I have a goodfriend,his Englishname is Anthony.He is very free and easy,we are the best friend.One day,he telled me an idea of his:He tried to have a motorbike!I thought it was very interesting,we began to raise money very hard,because we really wanted to have that.Finally we succeeded ,But he was going to Taiwan without notice,I’m verysad.The day before he leaves,he gives me a wallet as present.To this day,I still use this wallet,This is very meaningful for me,thanks.

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Hello everybody,today I come to tell you a story about myself.Two years ago,I had a good friend,his English name is Anthony.He is very free and easy,we are the best friends.One day,he told me an idea of his:He tried to have a motorbike!I thought it was very interesting,we began to raise money very hard,because we really wanted to have that.Finally we succeeded ,But he went to Taiwan without notice,I was very sad.The day before he left ,he gave me a wallet as a present.Until today,I still use this wallet,This is very meaningful for me,thanks.