帮忙看下这篇文章语法有无问题?文章讲述的是一位先生坐出租车参观北京,但下车后身份证丢在出租车上.司机又把它送回来了.Oneday,Mr.WangarrivedinBeijingforavisit.Mr.WangfeelsexcitedbecauseBeijing

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帮忙看下这篇文章语法有无问题?
文章讲述的是一位先生坐出租车参观北京,但下车后身份证丢在出租车上.司机又把它送回来了.
One day,Mr.Wang arrived in Beijing for a visit.Mr.Wang feels excited because Beijing is wonderful!When he arrived at the hotel.He couldn't find his ID card.SO he was very upset.Just a moment,the driver send the ID card for the Mr.Wang.Mr.Wang was suiprised at first,then he feels very happy.
语法错误的提出来并帮我修正,再帮忙添加一些句子.

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所有feels都改成felt,just a moment改成before long吧,最后一行for改成to.
我感觉如果是初中作文的话,也还算行了.但是具体过程没怎么交代啊,前面都没提到出租车观赏,后面就写了司机了.
Mr.Wang wanted to go sightseeing Beijing by taxi.When he arrived,he felt excited...加你原文到wonderful.
Then he got on a taxi to start his trip.
只能这样加了,有可能哪里打错了,仓促