我的英语对话是否正确?该怎么改正wei说(18:44):Youhadbettergobathingtogetherwithmetomorrowafternoon.Ifyoudonow,youwillfeelyouarewastingmoney.wei说(18:45):IamusingFetionsoftwaretochatwithyouonlineforfree

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我的英语对话是否正确?该怎么改正
wei 说(18:44):
You had better go bathing together with me tomorrow afternoon.If you do now,you will feel you are wasting money.
wei 说(18:45):
I am using Fetion software to chat with you online for free,so I can write as many words as possible.
wei 说(18:48):
From next Wednesday on ,I think we had better commnicate with each oher by message in English
wei 说(18:53):
Because I will attend a mathematical examination next Tuesday.After it,I will spend the whole afternoon review words learned in senior school.
wei 说(18:53):
review
reviewing
wei 说(18:57):
Only in this way can I also improve my English.When having dinner,a crazy idea that I will translate all my diary into English this Winter Holiday came into my mind
wei 说(18:59):
I will come back at eight sharp
wei 说(19:05):
I have something forgotten to tell you. In the vedio I record ,I can only heard my vioce when you and I sang. Maybe because my vioce is low
wei 说(19:07):
But Bin Xue said case my singing and yours are mixed well ,which maked me happy
wei 说(19:12):
To tell you a bad news,the price of N78 rise 40 yuan to 1820,which I have never expected!As time goes on,the price always decreases,but it did't

Answer 1

偶尔有几个语法上的小错误.但是最大的问题是,读起来很费劲.
聊天应该口语化,口语中往往用简单句,那样利于对方理解.你看你那里有许多从句,倒装等等,不要当文章去写.
也有不少中国式的英语,和啰嗦的话.这个能力不是一天两天能锻炼出的.多和外国人交流,没有的话,可以在网上交个外国的网友,互通邮件.看原版电影.多读外国原版小说.
学外语是个积累的过程,你能用于现实的交流说明你还是很聪明的,外语就是用多了自然就好了.