Writeanarticlecalled“Doyouhaveacold?”Writeaboutwhatyoushouldandshouldn'tdo.DoyouhaveacoldEverybodysometimeshasacold.Whenyouacold,youshouldrest.Youshouldn'tgooutatnight.Youshouldgotobadearlyforafewnights

Question

Write an article called “Do you have a cold?”
Write about what you should and shouldn't do.
Do you have a cold
Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you a cold ,you should rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bad early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.You shouldn't eat junk food like ice cream.You should drink lots of water.
If you has a healthy lifestyle,you should try do exercise,and you should eat a balance of yin and yang to be healthy.
帮忙改下错哈,明早之前哈
请问下，哪个是正确的，是you should try do exercise，还是you should try to do exercise

Answer 1

Do you have a cold
Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you a cold ,you should(have a) rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bad early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.You shouldn't eat junk food like ice cream.You should drink lots of water.
If you has(has 应改为want to have,第二人称用复数） a healthy lifestyle,you should try（to） do（more) exercise(应该加负数,变成exercises）,and you should eat a balance(把balance改成balanced) of yin and yang to be healthy.
作文写的还不错,主要注意单复数的应用,就可以了.