我写的雅思作文里有几句句子不知道有没有问题,Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthedevelopmentsofhigh-techcangreatlyreducethewasteoftimeandextremelyincreasetheefficiencyespeciallyintheageofmassinformation.是

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我写的雅思作文里有几句句子不知道有没有问题,
It is generally acknowledged that the developments of high-tech can greatly
reduce the waste of time and extremely increase the efficiency especially in
the age of mass information.
是不是应该把can去掉改成别的?
Invariably do we admire that the great talented people who have made
significant contributions to the world like Bill Gates advancing the IT
field.
Only the combination of them of which we take advantage can we make influence
on our personality and development during our life process .
这两句倒装句倒得对吗?还有第一句倒装读起来是不是有点别扭?同样,第二句倒
装的can用得对吗?

Answer 1

1） development貌似抽象名词,不可数,没有复数形式.
2）文中的两个倒装似乎不符合倒装要求.
比如一些含有否定意义的副词如：Hardly, Seldom, Never等置于句首,才可倒装.
a. Never have I seen him before.
b. Seldom does she dines out.
c. Hardly had I entered the room when she left.
再比如Only 必须和句中的状语一起置于句首,才可构成倒装句型.
a. Only in this way can we solve the problem.
b. Only then did I realize I was wrong.
而 C. Only she can answer the question.