请教:2009年12月大学英语六级考试全真模拟试题(1)第1大题第1小题如何解答?

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【题目描述】

第1题：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled MyView on On-campus College Students’ Marriage. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.      国家允许在校大学生结婚

2.      有些人持反对意见，有些人表示支持

3.      你的观点

【我提交的答案】：I think on campus College students` marriage .

【参考答案分析】：范文：

My View on On-campus College Students’ Marriage

  It is a new thing thatChinese on-campus college students are legally allowed to get married before they complete their courses. Many peopleapplaudthis new developmentwhileothers haveexpressedtheir concern about this.

  Those whodisapprove ofthis new trend believe that college stundents will inevitably have less time and energy for their academic life. One common argument,however, for on-compus college students’ marriageis thata number of students do have a desire for an ideal marriage. Now that they havecome of age, theyare entitled tosuch happiness.

  Of the two views discussed above,I’m in favor ofthe former. My reason is that on-campus students areladen with academic tasks.If one gets married now, he or she has to work much harder than other students because they have to solve their financial problems at the same time. As a married couple, for instance, theyare supposed torent a room in or outside the university, which will naturallyadd to their spending.

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有关校内大学生婚恋之我见

        这是一个新生事物，中国在校大学生被允许合法结婚之前，他们完成他们的课程。许多人拍手称赞这一新的发展，而其他人则表达了他们对这个问题的关注。

 那些不赞成这一新趋势的人认为，大学学生难免会有更少的时间和精力去为他们的学术生活而做准备。一个常见的论点，但是，对于大学生来说，在校内大学生婚姻中，有相当多的学生确实有一个对理想婚姻的渴望。现在他们已经成年了，有权获得这样的幸福。

 

 在上面讨论的两种观点中，我比较赞成前者。我的理由是，校外学生满口都是有学术任务。但是，如果一个人结婚了，他或她要比其他学生更努力地工作，因为他们要在同一时间解决他们的经济问题。作为一对已婚的夫妇，举个例子来说，他们应该在校园外面租一间房房，而这样则自然会增加他们的开支了。