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假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.1.手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无
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假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.1.手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修.2.要求:公司应尽快予以更换.注意:(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息,可适当发挥;(2 词数:120左右;(3) 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; (参考词汇:配件—— spare part)
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【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.
要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修. 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换.
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 参考词汇:配件-- spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【名师点评】
本文内容要点齐全,语言丰富,结构合理,如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况,中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委,最后明确提出自己的要求,明白流畅,将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚,较好的完成了任务.全文以一般过去时为基调,结合主动语态与被动语态,并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词,使文章结构完整严密.固定短语,如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用,使文章的语言显得地道而精炼.
【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.
要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修. 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换.
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 参考词汇:配件-- spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【名师点评】
本文内容要点齐全,语言丰富,结构合理,如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况,中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委,最后明确提出自己的要求,明白流畅,将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚,较好的完成了任务.全文以一般过去时为基调,结合主动语态与被动语态,并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词,使文章结构完整严密.固定短语,如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用,使文章的语言显得地道而精炼.
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