修改短文(英语)帮我修改一下我的这篇短文,作文要求:史密斯先生现在在上海工作,他来这里已经三年多了,在工作中他结交了许多中国朋友,他常说他很喜欢和中国人共事,他将一直在这里工作,

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修改短文(英语)
帮我修改一下我的这篇短文,
作文要求:史密斯先生现在在上海工作,他来这里已经三年多了,在工作中他结交了许多中国朋友,他常说他很喜欢和中国人共事,他将一直在这里工作,直到,直到..
必须使用单词:Mr.Smith,work,now,he,three years,make,often,say,Shanghai
A forigner in Shanghai
More and more foigners come to China and work there.Mr.Smith,for example,has been working in Shanghai for more than three years.
He is very popular in the company because of his amity.He gets on well with everyone and also has made some Chinese friends.
And he always says that Shanghai is a beautiful city and he likes working with Chinese people.He also said he would like to work there forever...
In a word,Mr.Smith has fell in love with Shanghai.This is th man,the foigner who works aborad.
点明我的错误,文章里的直到,直到..那里我写的不是很好.能给我一个好的句子,一个好的开头和好的结尾吗?要有文采的.

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More and more foreiner(原文拼写错误)to(and)work here(there).for example,has been working in Shanghai for more than three years.He is very popular in the company because of his amity.He gets on well wi...