一篇500字左右的英语故事,我写了200字,求继续往下写,九点zq坐等!尽量用一些简单的词,写完之后最好可以发到邮箱里,谢谢^^（[e-mail]）写完的部分：Longtimeagotherewasaoldman,hisnameis

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一篇500字左右的英语故事,我写了200字,求继续往下写,九点z q坐等!
尽量用一些简单的词,写完之后最好可以发到邮箱里,谢谢^_^（[e-mail]）写完的部分：Long time ago there was a old man,his name is Peter,he is a designer.He has a wife.His wife was very beautiful,she is a model.They live in a villa,and every day Peter design the dress,and Lucy (Peter's wife) often wear her husband gives hers dresses and take photos to show them.One day Peter and Lucy go to a orphanage with a volunteer activity.When they go home Lucy said:"I think I want to adoption a child.""oh,my god!What's happen with you!You know I really don't like children,they always make noise too much!So I can't do anything!" He looks very dreadful and angry."But ,they are so pitiful,they can't find they're father and mother.I think we should be do something for them.They need people love them."...Next day,Lucy take beak a child.She is shy with strangers.But she is not shy with Lucy.She likes Lucy,because Lucy is very friendly to her.After a time,Peter was went Home,and he see a child,he is not angry,he think if you angry child will cry,he don't like it.He looks very nice,he don't want this girl cry."Ok,Angela lets do a self-introduction." Lucy said.Then Angela said:" Nice...nice to meet you.My...my name is Angela." She's voice is very small.往下写主要是写peter对Angela的态度逐渐变好,但是Lucy有一天突然得了重病他们把房子什么的都卖了,还欠了一大堆债,peter也没有什么新的设计思路,但是因为Angela一直非常乐观,peter有了新的设计,卖的很火,最后还完了债,过上了以前那样的生活.
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整个文我都改了一点,语法有错.我帮你改了,也写完了整篇,如果不行要告诉我 :)Long time ago there was an old man, his name was Peter, he was a designer. He had a wife. His wife was very beautiful and she wa...