改错“I have a good frieni who"s name is Li mei.She is ourmonitor and one of the excellent students in our class.( )clever as she is ,but she works Very hard.We have a( )Lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she( )told me that som

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改错“I have a good frieni who's name is Li mei.She is our
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.( )clever as she is ,but she works Very hard.We have a( )Lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she( )told me that something happened when her parents was out.( )She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while( )She smelt something burning.she stopped look out( )of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out( )

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I have a good frieni (who's) whose name is Li mei.She is our
monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.( whose)clever as she is ,(but) she works Very hard.We have a( 去掉but)lot (on) common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she(in )told me that something happened when her parents (was) out.(were )She was doing her homework one Sunday morning (while)( when)She smelt something burning.she stopped ()look out( to)of the window and (find) a cloud of smoke coming out(found )