英文改错somethingaboutmyfamilyToday,Iwanttotalksomethingaboutmyfamily.Therearefourpersonsinit.Myparents,myelderbrotherwhois5yearsolderthanme,andI.Dadisanengineer,Heisthepillaramongus.andmomisa(家庭主妇)

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英文改错
something about my family
Today ,I want to talk something about my family.There are four persons in it.My parents,my elder brother who is 5 years older than me ,and I.Dad is an engineer,He is the pillar among us.and mom is a (家庭主妇).I think she is the most kind and beautiful woman in the world.My brother is handsome,and he is on working now.I love them so much just like they love me.
Many times,we four just like good friends.we have joked and played balls together.In the other hand.Sometimes when I made mistakes,They would been very trict to me.
说明原因~实在是不知道怎么写下去了~T.T

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说实话,这哪里是英语.
帮你写一点.
I would like to share with you something about my family.I have a lovely family which has four members:my parents,my older brother and I.My father,an engineer,is a breadmaker.He is very hardworking,and we all respect him.My mother,a housewife,who is kind and beautiful,helping us with daily house works.My brother is five years older than me,and he is rather handsome.He has been working for a while.I,the youngest member in the family,have worked hard on my study subjects.
My family is a very harmonious one,and we love each other very much.Normally,we four just communicate like good friends,joking and playing with each other.However,when sometimes I made mistake,my parents will be strict with me and I will feel sad.
给分吧.
不想帮你改,因为那没法改.不如重写.