有一篇作文题目是2005中考作文看看有没有语法错误,结构错乱（或偏题）如果满分20分（8+8+4）给几分growingpainsandgainsJustaseverycoinhastwosides,growinguphasbothpainsandgains.Ononehand,growi

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有一篇作文 题目是2005中考作文 看看有没有语法错误,结构错乱（或偏题） 如果满分20分（8+8+4）给几分
growing pains and gains
Just as every coin has two sides,growing up has both pains and gains. On one hand, growing up symbolizes progress , completeness and beauty. It helps a student become a more useful person. But on the other hand, it means much pressure and no freedom. It always confuses the students how to deal with the problems. Briefly , growing up is a part of the life , it certainly has lots of pains and gains. We should face it with big ,confident smiles.

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非常不错啊!语言很地道也很老道,只是内容略显干涩,但只要覆盖所给的要点,应该也没问题.如果让我打分,至少19分,满分也有可能.
建议练些其他话题的文章,因为完全相同的题不会再出现.加油!
Good luck!