Haveiatruelove,iwillcherishitcarefully.Beingyoung,ididnotwantit.Butnowiamwaitingfor.Ihavebeenattractingbyagirlwhoilove我要写的中文意思是如果我有一份真爱,我会好好珍惜它,当我年轻的时候,我没有

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Have i a true love,i will cherish it carefully.Being young,i did not want it.But now i am waiting for.I have been attracting by a girl who i love
我要写的中文意思是如果我有一份真爱,我会好好珍惜它,当我年轻的时候,我没有想要.但现在,我正在寻找.我已经被我所爱的女孩吸引.
这样写对么,自己写的,
1楼的翻译感觉还没我好.晕.
have i a true love 就是虚拟语气if i have a true love转换而来的.比较简洁
being young=when i was young 是分词勾句啊.
i have been attarcting是现在完成进行时啊.如果用完成时因该是i have attracted,没有 have been pp这个时态啊.大哥

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If I have a true love,I will cherish it carefully.When I was young,I did't want it.But now I am looking for it.I have been attracted by a girl who I love.
1)when I was young我只是个人认为用起来更顺口一些,我没有说你的用法就是错误的
2)你给的汉语是,我在寻找,所以我翻译成了I am looking for it
3）I have been attracted by..是对的,意思是被...吸引（表示“被持续地吸引着”的状态）,因为be attracted
by是固定搭配,变成一般完成时就是have been attracted by,你可以在知道上搜索“have been attracted by”可
以看到很多相关句子,比如I have been deeply attracted by him 我被他深深地吸引着.