请以MadameCurie为题，写一篇100个单词左右的英语短文。要点如下：1.MadameCurie是世界著名的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰（Poland）一个教师家庭，卒于1934年。2.她从小爱学习并希望成

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请以Madame Curie为题，写一篇100个单词左右的英语短文。要点如下：
1. Madame Curie 是世界著名的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰（Poland）一个教师家庭，卒于1934年。
2. 她从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，16岁中学毕业，24岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，生活简朴（live a simple life），学习刻苦.
3. 她一生致力于(devote…to)科学研究，于1903年和1911年两次分别获诺贝尔物理奖（Nobel Prize for Physics）和诺贝尔化学奖。
4. 一个女人事业成功不容易，而一生中两次获诺贝尔奖更为困难，居里夫人将作为一位伟大的女性永远为人们所怀念（be remembered as）.

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Madame Curie was a world famous woman scientist. She was born in a teacher's family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.From her early childhood she loved to study and hoped to become a scientist. She finished middle school at the age of 16. At 24 she left for Paris and entered Paris University. She lived a very simple life and studied very hard.Madame Curie devoted her whole life to the study of science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903 and for Chemistry in 1911.It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work. It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.
分 析：
这是一篇提纲类作文，本作文中给出的要点比较具体 故需要准确表达，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】这篇范文的特点是词组较多： 如：at the age of 16. A， lived a very simple lifedevoted her whole life to ，won the Nobel Prize for Physics，句型上使用了地道的英语语言： It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. 这两句话用了it做形式主语.So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.