英语翻译..我国是一个拥有世界五分之一人口的人口大国,且GDP总量也跃居全球第三,但我国保险深度、密度却远低于世界平均水平,其主要原因就是我国居民保险意识不足,国民保险意识的提高

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我国是一个拥有世界五分之一人口的人口大国,且GDP总量也跃居全球第三,但我国保险深度、密度却远低于世界平均水平,其主要原因就是我国居民保险意识不足,国民保险意识的提高已成为我国保险业发展的关键问题.为此,笔者就我国居民保险意识淡薄的原因进行分析并提出相应改进的建议,以促进我国保险业健康快速发展.
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China is the most populous country that owns one fifth of the world's population.And the GDP is the third of the world.But our country's insurance depth and density is far below the world average,the main reason is lack of awareness of residents insurance,national insurance awareness have become key issues in the insurance industry.To this end,the writer analyzes the causes of the weak awareness of the people insured and proposes recommendations to promote the healthy and rapid development of Chinese insurance industry.

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China is a country with a big population which occupies one fifth of the world's population,and her GDP has ranked the third among all the countries around the world.However,the depth and density of i...