英语翻译年末将至,XXX公司内部将举办年会,其中会有员工抽奖活动的环节,贵司是否能够赞助一些捐款给我司员工作为抽奖的彩金,请尽快告知我,下面是GOOGLE翻译的一段Astheendofthisyearisappro

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英语翻译
年末将至,XXX公司内部将举办年会,其中会有员工抽奖活动的环节,贵司是否能够赞助一些捐款给我司员工作为抽奖的彩金,请尽快告知我,
下面是GOOGLE翻译的一段
As the end of this year is approaching,internal staff will hold the annual meeting.there will be a raffle.I am wondering that whether your company can provide sponsorship.Please let me know as soon as possible
太白了,希望高人可以优化下,或是有更好的翻译,

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google翻译比较机械化
It's approaching the end of this year,the XXX company annual celebration of new year will take place soon,there will be a Lucky Draw time for the staffs.We are wondering if you could provide some fund for the lucky money in name of our sponsor.Appreciate your concern and looking forward to your kind reply,thank you very much.
这种事还是多用虚拟语气的好,比较委婉,多用we而不使用I.本人专8,信我哦,哈哈