英语论文写作问题1."XXXisatraditionalChinesemedicineandespeciallywidelyusedinHenanprovince."这句话语法上有错误吗2."XXX,whichwewishtobeconsideredforpublicationinNUTUREandhasnotbeensubmittedelsewhereforpub

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英语论文写作问题
1."XXX is a traditional Chinese medicine and especially widely used in Henan province."这句话语法上有错误吗
2."XXX,which we wish to be considered for publication in NUTURE and has not been submitted elsewhere for publication,in whole or in part." 这句话语法上有错误吗?

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1.."XXX is a traditional Chinese medicine and especially widely used in Henan province.
一直以为especially widely used前面少了一个 is,不过有看到这样一个句子：He was arrested,convicted and sentenced to prison又觉得is 的确的可以省略掉的,不过这个句子和你列出来的句子也有不同的地方谓语后面的都是to prison.再看看下面这个句子
When a beneficiary with an unsatisfied warrant is concurrently entitled and is arrested and subsequently convicted and confined
我列出的这两个句子都是从网上找到的,这个is到底能不能省略,我觉得根据我的语感最好还是保留着比较不会怪怪的感觉.
然后是especially widely used in Henan province你的意思是在河南省用得尤其广泛,还是用得很广泛,尤其是在河南?如果是前者我觉得especially最好省略,如果是后者参考一下这个句子：
live fruits are widely used,especially in the Mediterranean.
2.你要表达的是：某篇论文我们认为能上NATURE,所以就没有投递到任何其它的出版社.是吧?
submit作为提交的意思时是不及物动词,所以后面要加个to
我觉得这个句子错误挺多的,至少是很不通顺.
XXX,which we wish to be publshed in NUTURE,thus has not been submitted to any elsewhere for publication,neither in whole,or in part.