一年有四个季节,每个季节都各有其特点.而我最喜欢的季节是秋季,特别是夏秋交际的日子,夏的余温还没有消散,秋的微凉也还未降临.母亲会在这天为我买上最后的一箱冰棍.并且在秋季,各种

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一年有四个季节,每个季节都各有其特点.而我最喜欢的季节是秋季,特别是夏秋交际的日子,夏的余温还没有消散,秋的微凉也还未降临.母亲会在这天为我买上最后的一箱冰棍.并且在秋季,各种各样的果实都会成熟,特别是橘子、甘蔗、葡萄和提子,这些都是我的最爱.并且秋季也是健身旅游的黄金季节.我喜欢秋季,喜欢它的美景,喜欢它的美食 There are four seasons in a year,each season has its own characteristics.I most like the season is the autumn,especially in communication day,warm summer has not dissipated,the cool autumn has not yet come.Mother during the day as I bought last box popsicles.And in the fall,all kinds of fruits are ripe,especially oranges,sugarcane,grapes and raisins,these are my best love.And autumn is the golden season of fitness tourism.I like autumn,like the beauty of it,like it Food.英语作文,请求大师们修改一下,行不?

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不错哦,没必要修改