中英互译希望得到高手们的评点原文是：美利坚民族的出现是这个星球上的一个奇迹.数百年前,一群欧洲移民来到广袤、荒凉的北美大陆,寻求自由与繁荣的梦想.数百年后,他们的民族成为了

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中英互译 希望得到高手们的评点
原文是：
美利坚民族的出现是这个星球上的一个奇迹.数百年前 ,一群欧洲移民来到广袤、荒凉的北美大陆,寻求自由与繁荣的梦想.数百年后,他们的民族成为了世界上最强大的国家之一,他们的国家成为世界上最强大的国家之一,他们的文明成为世界上最有影响力的文明之一.
本人的翻译：
The appearance of U.S.A is a miracle on the earth.Hundreds years ago,a group of European emigrants came to the large and desolate continnent to find the freedom and their flourishing dream.Hundreds years later,their nation was one of the strongest nations ;their country is one of the weathliest countries; their culture is one of the effecest cultures.

Answer 1

1.appearance->history
2 hundreds of years ago / 200 years ago,emigrants->philgrams 可以再有一些逻辑,为什么freedom,flourishing dream.
3.Today,they build their land the best melting pot,their nation the most powerful in the world,and their civilization world influential
或者是 Today,they turn their land into the best melting pot,their nation the most powerful one,their civilization a key role in the world.
其实这样的文章已经翻译的很好啦:)
我也是业余的:)