请找出下文的语法错误及用语不当的地方,Itwasacoldwinterdayin2010,twowomenhurriedinShanghaieastliverandgallbladdersurgeryhospital,carryingCTfilms.Halfanhourlater,theycalledonDr.WuMengchao,thefamousLiverand

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请找出下文的语法错误及用语不当的地方,
It was a cold winter day in 2010,two women hurried in Shanghai east liver and gallbladder surgery hospital,carrying CT films.
Half an hour later,they called on Dr.Wu Mengchao,the famous Liver and gallbladder surgery expert in the world.The extreme anxiety in their eyes made Dr.Wu curious and concerned
It was a cold winter day in 2010,two women hurried in Shanghai east liver and gallbladder hospital,carrying a packet of CT films.
Half an hour later,they called on Dr.Wu Mengchao,the famous Liver and gallbladder surgery expert in the world.The extreme anxiety in their eyes made Dr.Wu curious and concerned.
“Please,please help our elder brother!”One of them handed the CT films to him and said,”Look at the films.Could you cut off the tumor on our brother’s liver?”
He took a close look and said:” Well,it’s not so serious as it's seemed,I can make it and your brother will be fine.”
Suddenly the two women’s eyes were full of tears.
He asked the two women what had happened,not expecting they knelted down suddenly.
“We have gone to another hospital for treatment,but the doctor insisted us change the liver and request a large amount of money!It was his trick to get unjust gain!We just couldn't afford extra pay any more.”
"How despicable he was!"Dr.Wu got angry ,stood up and said to them,"I promise,I'll cure your sick brother ,and you'll never have to spend one cent more than it needs!"
After the meeting,Dr.Wu held two consultations and done B ultrasonic examination by himself in order to complete the operation perfectly.
Finally he held surgery and cut off the tumor successfully.
After 42 days in,the patient left hospital with the company of his family sound and safe.
Now,when the family think of the incident,they still can't help tearing.
People always say,"a good doctor needs not only expert skill ,but also noble virtues."We decide it's true because of Dr.Wu.
作为记事文,哪里写的不好也请指出,

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好像没有地方错!