英语翻译传真已经收到,有3点需要修改.一,需要把出访时间XX月XX日-XX月XX日写在信里.二,公司名字不是'XXXX',要改成XXXX.三,XX的职位不是XX,是XX.另外,把XX日-XX日去YY地方的邀请函也传真过来.

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英语翻译
传真已经收到,有3点需要修改.
一,需要把出访时间XX月XX日-XX月XX日写在信里.
二,公司名字不是'XXXX' ,要改成XXXX.
三,XX的职位不是XX,是XX.
另外,把XX日-XX日去YY地方的邀请函也传真过来.

Answer 1

I've received your fax,and found that there are following three points need to be modified:
1:The visiting date from xxx to xxx should be marked in the letter
2:The name of the company should be A(正确） instead of B（错误）
3：The title should be A instead of B
In addition,please fax the invitation to YY from xx to xx to me also.