总觉得自己的英文写作水平,口语水平很很很一般,用的单词句子都很像小学生这是一篇我明天要讲的文章,主要讲一些观点,麻烦大家帮我改改,内容主要讲你是否赞成整容手术Today.wemainlydiscuss

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总觉得自己的英文写作水平,口语水平很很很一般,用的单词句子都很像小学生
这是一篇我明天要讲的文章,主要讲一些观点,麻烦大家帮我改改,内容主要讲你是否赞成整容手术
Today.we mainly discuss the topic is"whether agree or not to make the cosmetic surgery".
In fact that we have different opinion.We must divide different situation.AS a normal person of apperance,i think that we don't need cosmetic surgery,because the nature is
the most beatiuful.
However,i watched the news in the internet recently,which described a young girl suffered form the burn by a boy.The girl's body have a large area burns by a fire.However,even if the girl have cure,him apperance will not rehabilitate.Therefore,i think the gilr should make the cosmetic surgery.In this case,in order to a life in the future.
So i think if you don't have the special situation,we will not need this surgery.

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写的还不错,呵呵. 可以的不需要修改.