这是我口语考试的自我介绍,看看有什么可以改的或者补充Mynameisxxx.Iwasborninfujianprovincein1999.IreadtheeighthgradeinXixiangmiddleschool.,MyfavoritesubjectisChinese,becauseIthinkitisveryusefuland

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这是我口语考试的自我介绍,看看有什么可以改的或者补充
My name is xxx .I was born in fujian province in 1999.I read the eighth grade in Xixiang middle school.,My favorite subject is Chinese, because I think it is very useful and interesting .I am a outgoing,friendly and warm-hearted student, that is why I have many friends.l often help them,so when I am in trouble, they will help me. I’m also a full of energetic and fashion-minded person ,so I love of learning.I like playing football, it makes me feel relaxed.Because I often practice, so I have very good ability to play football.My dream is become a boss, I will study hard to achieve it.There are three people in my family.They are nice to me,they also give me create a good learning environment.I have good habits because of them.
That is all for my self-introduction, thank you!

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改的是大写,需要删掉的在挂号里：
My name is xxx .I was born in Fujian province in 1999.I AM IN the eighth grade in Xixiang middle school.,My favorite subject is Chinese, because I think it is very useful and interesting .I am AN outgoing,friendly and warm-hearted student, that is why I have many friends.l often help them,so when I am in trouble, they will help me. I’m also (a) full of energetic and A fashion-minded person ,so I love (of) learning.I like playing football, it makes me feel relaxed.Because I often practice, so I AM (have) very good (ability to) playING football.My dream is TO become a boss, I will study hard to achieve it.There are three people in my family.They are nice to me,they also give me (create) a good learning environment.I have good habits because of them.That is all for my self-introduction, thank you!