外贸英语短文,请人帮忙语法纠错,老外的习惯是什么如果有懂外贸英语地道点的当然更好啦没有也没关系因为我知道我的语法错误有很多因为我是用翻译软件翻译的以下是原文和我想表达的

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外贸英语短文,请人帮忙语法纠错,老外的习惯是什么
如果有懂外贸英语地道点的当然更好啦 没有也没关系因为我知道我的语法错误有很多 因为我是用翻译软件翻译的
以下是原文和我想表达的大概意思：（）太长了 分两段）
A.Computer screens have chromatic aberration,especially between CRT screen and LCD screen,we can not guarantee that the color of
our products will be exactly the same with the photographs you saw.
B.the wigs' colorXXXXXX and XXXXXXsizes according to your measurements ,Please give us your information.
Paymengt:
(Please place order and submit shipping address first and provide your contact phone number for the convenience of EMS delivery.But we're not very sure whether the goods you want isn't sell out so you'd better not to click "Pay Now" button instantly,you can contact us first).
DHgate Safety payment;DHgate Escow payment service
Paypal; Credit Card; Bank to Bank Wire Transfers; Western Union,
Shipping Method:
All items will be shipped by China EMS,UPS/DHL/CHINA POST/HK POST(3 --10 business days).
Express delivery is only to US/UK/Canada/Australia,France,Germany,Belgium,Denmark,Finland,Ireland,Italy,Malta fever,Norway,Portugal,Switzerland,Sweden,Netherlands,Spain,Austria,other countries will be subject to change with our email confirmation.
Preparation of the goods:
We will prepare your goods within 2-6 business days upon receipt of payment and Product Specifications (except Saturday and Sunday).
And we will soon as possible.It takes about 5-7 days to ship to USA/UK/Canada/Australia.Shipping to Europe need 7-10days.
Shipping to Asia need 2-4days .AT the same time,we will give you a tracking number after we send out your goods.
RETURN POLICY:
We accept returns for refund or exchanges on all items.We want you to be satisfied with your purchase.If you are not happy with your item,call us within 3 days to obtain a return authorization.
Attention:
A.We accept returns when we sent you the incorrect item or size but we not responsible for the shipping of sending Because we have already pay for the freight when we deliver.
The buyer must confirm payment within 2 days after receiving the goods .Items must be return not used and in its original packaging.
B.Please don `t forget to leave you order detail in the comment collum for sizes and other requirements!
About the store
I wish to see our point of view is the same,Example our aesthetics and values
If you are searching for free shipping goods,please come to my store to select
Our aim is for you to save every penny,by the best supply wo have.
bigger order,bigger discount
Our advantage:
A.High quality and competitive price is offered.
B.Fast and safe shipping is ensured..
C.quick response and on-line communication
D.The best understanding of China's goods Ex-factory price,as well as logistics discount
The retail price we propose:xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx(USD)
Would like to see more styles or other goods please click on my shop view
运送到欧洲需要7 - 10天。亚洲航运需要2 - 4天。同时我们会发给你货物追踪号码
返回政策：
我们接受所有items.We.如果您不完全满意自己的项目，3天内调用我们取得回报的授权。
注意
所有销售都是最终结果，我们接受退货时，我们向您发送了不正确的项目或大小,但是我们不支付运回的运费，因为我们已经为运出货物付过运费。
买方必须在收到货品2天内确认付款。商品必须归还还没穿破并在其原包装。
请不要忘记留下您的尺寸和其他要求评论订单明细
★★★★★
我希望我们有相同的美学和价值观
如果您正在寻找合适的方法，免费送货，你可以来我店选择
我们的目标是为您节省每一分钱，因为我们有最好的供应
bigger order,bigger discount
我们的优势是
A高品质和竞争力的价格提供。
B快速和安全运输得到保证。
C快速反应和在线沟通
D中国优秀保障供应
建议零售价：xxxxxxxxxxxx
希望看到更多款式请点击我的店铺查看xxxxxxxxxx
我是个刚刚注册的卖家 但是请相信我的真诚和我的服务 ..ths
希望我们能够保持长期合作 有什么建议和意见可以对我说.请你帮我改正语法错误

Answer 1

A.Due to monitor settins and color displays of different computer screens / monitors,we do not guarantee that the color of our product will be exactly the same as how you saw it on the photographs.
B.Please provide us detailed information of the color and the size (according to your measurements) of the wig you would like to
Payment Method:
(Please place your order with your shipping address and contact number for EMS delivery.To avoid sold out situations,press "Pay Now" button instantly or you can contact our customer service first to confirm that the product is still available.
DHgate Safety payment
DHgate Escow payment service
Paypal
Credit Card
Bank to Bank Wire Transfers
Western Union
Shipping Method:
All items will be shipped by China EMS,UPS/DHL/CHINA POST/HK POST(3 --10 business days).
Express delivery is only for the following countries US/UK/Canada/Australia,France,Germany,Belgium,Denmark,Finland,Ireland,Italy,Malta fever,Norway,Portugal,Switzerland,Sweden,Netherlands,Spain,Austria,other countries will be subject to change with our email confirmation.
Preparation of the goods & Shipping Time:
We will prepare your goods within 2-6 business days upon receiving your payment and product specifications (excluding weekends).
And we will soon as possible.
2-4 days to Asian countries
5-7 days to USA/UK/Canada/Australia.
7-10 days to European countries.
Tracking number provided.
RETURN POLICY:
We accept refunds or exchanges on all item since your satisfaction is highly valued by us.If you are not fully satisfied with your item,please call us within 3 days of receiving the product to obtain a return authorization.
Attention:
A.Although we do accept returns on inccorectly sent items or sizes,we will not be responsible for shipping charges since those are already paid to the shipping company.
Please confirm your payment within 2 days after receiving the goods.Items must be return unused and in its original packaging.
B.Please do not forget to leave you order details (size,color,etc.) in the comment box.
About the store
I wish to see our point of view is the same,Example our aesthetics and values --> 这没看明白.
Please shop in my store if you are looking for free shipping.(刚才你不是说不退运费么……现在怎么又免运费了?）
We aim to provide you with the best we have,at a competitive price.We want you save every extra penny that you are not suppose to pay for.
Order in bulk for more discount.Please contact us to discuss about this.(买的多,给的折扣更多,请联系我们）
Our advantage:
A.High quality and competitive price is offered.
B.Fast and safe shipping is ensured..
C.Quick response and on-line communication is provided.
D.The best understanding of China's goods Ex-factory price,as well as logistics discount
Suggested Retail Price for the Item:xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx(USD)
If you would like to browse for more styles or other goods please click on "my shop"