找出下面复合句的错误!1.ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetingnextSunday.第二个句子是2.Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing第三个句子是W

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找出下面复合句的错误!
1.There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meeting next Sunday. 第二个句子是 2.It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing 第三个句子是We are driving out into the country,and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,and the bus was crowed. 三个复合句都是有错误的,失态没错 就是主谓宾啊 还是些位置放错了 或者该去掉一些什么的!谢谢大家了

Answer 1

1.There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meeting next Sunday.
句子正确.但不够简洁.应改为
Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
2.It is a beautiful day,and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing
句子正确.同样是不够精炼.应改为
It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.
3.We are driving out into the country,and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,and the bus was crowed.
句子正确（不过are要改为were）.但太多的并列句使得句子冗长.应改为
As we were driving out into the country,we met our first English teacher riding in a crowded bus.
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