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假如你是徐州市某高中学生李华,最近你们班针对徐州市开展的“绿色出行”(GreenTransport)计划,倡导市民骑自行车,并且提供了大批量的公用自行车,这一活动展开了讨论。

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假如你是徐州市某高中学生李华,最近你们班针对徐州市开展的“绿色出行”(Green Transport)计划,倡导市民骑自行车,并且提供了大批量的公用自行车,这一活动展开了讨论。

支持者观点:

1. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞问题

2. 骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有益健康等

反对者观点:

1. 骑自行车上学、上班都浪费时间,而且不安全

2. 现在空气污染严重,骑自行车可能有害健康

请根据以上信息写一篇议论文,并发表你自己的观点。

词数:120 左右

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Recently our city begins an activity called Green Transport which calls on the public to ride bicycles to work or to study. Our class hold a discussion about it last week.

Opinions are mainly divided into two parts. Some support it because of two reasons. One is that this kind of activity is good for the environment and can save energy. As we all know the population is becoming more and more serious so taking some actions are necessary. Besides riding a bicycle is good for our health. We don’t have enough time to do exercise so this is a good chance for us.

But just opposite to the supporters others think if the school is far away from home. It is a waste of time riding to school. As for health all of us know that the air pollution is very serious so taking outdoor exercise may be harmful to our health.

All in all in my opinion if possible we should make every effort to improve our living conditions and to protect our earth. So riding to work is a good chioce if not in a hurry and if the whether is fine.



分 析:
分析要求可知,最近你们班针对徐州市开展的“绿色出行”(Green Transport)计划,倡导市民骑自行车,并且提供了大批量的公用自行车,这一活动展开了讨论。短文应该用一般现在时,第一人称。词数120左右,不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意句子之间的连贯性。


【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如:called非谓语结构、which引导的定语从句,opposite to 、doing做主语句式等都很不错。


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