求帮忙看看这篇英语读后感有没有语法错误Thiswinter,Ireadabookaboutfarms.Thebookisveryinteresting.Thebookdescribesaboutfarms.Thebookdescribesthecropsandlivestockinfarms.Afterreading,Iknowinfarmstherearema

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求帮忙看看这篇英语读后感有没有语法错误
This winter ,I read a book about farms.The book is very interesting.
The book describes about farms.The book describes the crops and livestock in farms.
After reading,I know in farms there are many vegetables.For example,there is a lot of rice,wheat,tomatoes,potatoes,sorghum and so on.
And after reading this book,I know there is a lot of sheep in farms.And there is a lot of cattle and some chickens in farms.I think that is very interesting.
In the farm people work very hard.
I would like to visit a farm.

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语法上基本没有问题,但在写作上有改良的地方,例如book和farm重复出现多次,你可以用一些代词,或使用定语从句来代替,